a question for my flist, and others who wander in

Okay. So at least one person got confused by something in my fic "To the Rescue," which is making me wonder if I should now go back and edit it. So this question is for the people on my flist who've read the fic, plus anyone else who wanders in who's read it and feels like responding.

( proceed if you've read the fic and want to help out )