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dbskylerOkay. So at least one person got confused by something in my fic "To the Rescue," which is making me wonder if I should now go back and edit it. So this question is for the people on my flist who've read the fic, plus anyone else who wanders in who's read it and feels like responding.
The text in question is where Jo says, "After we take in the sights, want to go for a helicopter ride?" Apparently this came across to at least one person as Jo asking Sarah if she wants to go back to London on the helicopter. My intent, however, was that Jo is asking Sarah if she wants to go on a helicopter joyride.
So now, a quick poll:
[Poll #1361027]
The text in question is where Jo says, "After we take in the sights, want to go for a helicopter ride?" Apparently this came across to at least one person as Jo asking Sarah if she wants to go back to London on the helicopter. My intent, however, was that Jo is asking Sarah if she wants to go on a helicopter joyride.
So now, a quick poll:
[Poll #1361027]
