a minority opinion
Oct. 28th, 2009 09:31 pmI seem to be in the minority, but I really didn't like "The Madwoman in the Attic" at all.
It was supposed to be Rani's episode, but we didn't find out anything new about Rani that was interesting or relevant. She wants to be a journalist -- yeah, knew that already, and there was nothing about why she wants to be one, let alone what her time with Sarah has done to that ambition. We got introduced to Sam, an old friend from her old neighborhood, but there was a curious lack of connection between the two of them and no development of exactly what their friendship is all about. We found out that Rani has been telling Sam about Sarah and aliens, but there appeared to be no motivation behind her doing so other than a lack of discretion. Compare this to the moment when Clyde told the truth to his father -- his motivations were completely spelled out, and we in the audience were yelling "no!!!" at the screen even as we understood why he was breaking Sarah's trust. This time around, there was no emotion behind the revelation and it was never explained in terms of either Rani's character or her relationship to Sam. It also didn't seem to matter very much, not even to Sarah.
As for Eve, she was mildly interesting, and I liked that she was a refugee from the Time War, but the whole business with the ship didn't really make sense and I didn't like the super-powers that Eve and especially her ship seemed to be endowed with. I get that they're time-sensitive, but how exactly does that allow the ship to remove Sarah, Luke and Clyde from Rani's life? And what did that "removal" mean, anyway? Did they disappear -- cease to exist? Or did they just never allow Rani to come around and visit anymore? The revelation of this, its consequences and its resolution should have been the focus of the episode, but instead it was given backseat status in favor of the "Eve+Sam+caretaker go off and jaunt through space and have time-baby" plotline.
Finally, the ship just wanting a black hole all along and the solution with K-9 felt like a stupid and obvious plot device to bring back K-9 for the next episode.
However, there were a few moments in the episode that I liked. As many others have noted, Clyde and Sarah had great banter. The glimpse of the future with the TARDIS materializing was wonderful. And then there were the scenes that induced major, major squee: Time Warrior, Planet of the Spiders and Hand of Fear. Oh, Hand of Fear, you were best of all. All this time I've been fantasizing that Tom Baker would show up on SJA, and there he was!!!! I'll forgive a lot for having that moment.
Unfortunately, "Madwoman" had an awful lot that needed forgiving.
On the other hand, if this week's episode is half as good as it appears it will be, I'm going to be in an extremely forgiving mood.
*bounces with anticipation*
It was supposed to be Rani's episode, but we didn't find out anything new about Rani that was interesting or relevant. She wants to be a journalist -- yeah, knew that already, and there was nothing about why she wants to be one, let alone what her time with Sarah has done to that ambition. We got introduced to Sam, an old friend from her old neighborhood, but there was a curious lack of connection between the two of them and no development of exactly what their friendship is all about. We found out that Rani has been telling Sam about Sarah and aliens, but there appeared to be no motivation behind her doing so other than a lack of discretion. Compare this to the moment when Clyde told the truth to his father -- his motivations were completely spelled out, and we in the audience were yelling "no!!!" at the screen even as we understood why he was breaking Sarah's trust. This time around, there was no emotion behind the revelation and it was never explained in terms of either Rani's character or her relationship to Sam. It also didn't seem to matter very much, not even to Sarah.
As for Eve, she was mildly interesting, and I liked that she was a refugee from the Time War, but the whole business with the ship didn't really make sense and I didn't like the super-powers that Eve and especially her ship seemed to be endowed with. I get that they're time-sensitive, but how exactly does that allow the ship to remove Sarah, Luke and Clyde from Rani's life? And what did that "removal" mean, anyway? Did they disappear -- cease to exist? Or did they just never allow Rani to come around and visit anymore? The revelation of this, its consequences and its resolution should have been the focus of the episode, but instead it was given backseat status in favor of the "Eve+Sam+caretaker go off and jaunt through space and have time-baby" plotline.
Finally, the ship just wanting a black hole all along and the solution with K-9 felt like a stupid and obvious plot device to bring back K-9 for the next episode.
However, there were a few moments in the episode that I liked. As many others have noted, Clyde and Sarah had great banter. The glimpse of the future with the TARDIS materializing was wonderful. And then there were the scenes that induced major, major squee: Time Warrior, Planet of the Spiders and Hand of Fear. Oh, Hand of Fear, you were best of all. All this time I've been fantasizing that Tom Baker would show up on SJA, and there he was!!!! I'll forgive a lot for having that moment.
Unfortunately, "Madwoman" had an awful lot that needed forgiving.
On the other hand, if this week's episode is half as good as it appears it will be, I'm going to be in an extremely forgiving mood.
*bounces with anticipation*
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Date: 2009-10-29 05:35 am (UTC)(PS I confess to getting excited, thinking you were posting the next chapter of your Turn Left fic...)
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Date: 2009-10-29 05:50 am (UTC)Not your fault, and as I said, I realize that everyone else seems to have loved the episode. I really don't know why my reaction was so different, but since it was, I finally felt moved to express it.
I confess to getting excited, thinking you were posting the next chapter of your Turn Left fic
Aww, that's so nice to hear -- I keep thinking that everyone's lost interest in the fic or even forgotten it completely given that it's taking me so %^&*(*&^ long to finish it! Anyway, the chapter is not yet ready to be posted, but I promise it will get done and I will post it even if it's completely jossed by the time I get it out there ; )
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Date: 2009-10-29 05:53 am (UTC)No, but I feel guilty for having enjoyed it so much.
Aww, that's so nice to hear -- I keep thinking that everyone's lost interest in the fic or even forgotten it completely given that it's taking me so %^&*(*&^ long to finish it! Anyway, the chapter is not yet ready to be posted, but I promise it will get done and I will post it even if it's completely jossed by the time I get it out there ; )
Nope, not forgotten or lost interest... In fact, I'll have to go back and re-read the earlier chapters soon...
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Date: 2009-10-29 06:07 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-10-29 05:42 am (UTC)Definitely not fond of the frame story, though. It felt tacked-on.
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Date: 2009-10-29 06:17 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2009-10-30 08:08 am (UTC)I did bounce at all the Doctor clips, though. And Clyde.
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Date: 2009-10-30 04:59 pm (UTC)LOL, and yes, you've nailed it. They were indeed smashed-together stories.
instead of showing Rani making an actual mistake with negative consequences
That would have been a far better way to go, in my opinion.
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Date: 2009-10-30 07:30 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-10-30 10:23 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-11-14 10:53 am (UTC)Complete agreement. I was being nicely tantalised the whole way through by Rani in the attic. I was hoping for something unresolved (I knew I wouldn't get it, I'm not unfamiliar with SJA's tropes) or at least properly self-destructive. Blah.
I also didn't like the Eve plot all that much. Possibly because of the future-telling, deus ex machina ship and the mind-control of both humans and complex machinery. (Also, powered by a black hole??? Even the *TARDIS* isn't powered by a complete black hole, thank you very much for making a race more powerful than the Time Lords.)
Sam and Rani's relationship I found actually distressing. Okay, friend from long ago who you've wanted to keep in contact with, that's a bit sad. Best friend who you can't keep secrets from running off into space and you don't give him a hug? ARGH! Also, "you're Eve's son?" She knew Eve for a day of alien hunting, and Sam as her best friend. I'd rather she concentrated on losing that friendship as well as the Magically Disappearing Luke, Sarah Jane and Clyde. It wasn't a stuck together plot at all, you could see it was all meant to be echoing lost friendship, but *ouch*.
Eve as refugee from the Time War was interesting. Unfortunately, she was far too 'last daughter of Krypton' style superpowers for my tastes.
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Date: 2009-11-14 06:28 pm (UTC)It did come off that way, didn't it? The ship's magical wish-granting removal of Sarah, Luke and Clyde was especially annoying, because the TARDIS can't do that either. And Eve's mind-control superpowers bothered me too.
Also, "you're Eve's son?" She knew Eve for a day of alien hunting, and Sam as her best friend.
Really excellent point -- she should've cared more about him being Sam's son. They really did a horrible job with that supposed friendship -- they made it crucial to the plot set-up, then there was nothing in the script or the acting to support it other than a throwaway line or two.
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Date: 2010-10-17 03:58 am (UTC)Personally, I did enjoy the episode, quite a bit actually, but I must say that you make very valid points about it and I didn't actually think about some of the stuff you mentioned at all. Thinking over it, I also partially attribute the fact I enjoyed it to the fact that I am watching the episode out of order and context. To me it was "just another episode" and I really had no expectations for it, I'd probably forget what series it was in if it weren't for the references to the Doctor returning.
Sorry for the totally random post, but I just felt I needed to say something.
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Date: 2010-10-18 05:33 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed the episode. I wasn't trying to argue that it's a bad episode; I just really didn't like it, and after seeing tons of posts squeeing about how great it was, I felt moved to articulate what bothered me about it. But I'm happy for people who enjoyed it. We don't all have to have the same taste, and in this case almost everyone else thought it was a great episode, so I'm the one in the minority.