This is really excellent so far! I love that you've got Harry and the Brig involved (as is only right and proper) and Sarah's reactions just sound so in character.
And this line: "Don't worry about it," said the Brigadier. "Back in my day, things were irregular all the time." is made of 24 carat win.
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Date: 2009-01-27 05:42 pm (UTC)And this line: "Don't worry about it," said the Brigadier. "Back in my day, things were irregular all the time." is made of 24 carat win.