Read this on teaspoon, and dearly wanted to review it, but since I lack an account there I couldn't. Now I've found it here, so I will comment.
If this were posted on fanfiction.net, it'd go straight to my list of "fics I'd never tire of". I love pieces that I'm capable of reading every single word of and then go back to read when I'm done the first time, pieces that evoke some sort of emotion or thought in me. I really loved how this one was set up so that each section matched up with another section in the piece, mirroring and/or complementing each other. You certainly worked well with the fact that the "don't forget me" was a bit of a callback to her and the Doctor's original parting. Made for a very beautiful piece, and in a way made the moments that occurred in the actual show mean something even more. I finished reading it feeling a little bit sad but at the same time I got the warm fuzzies.
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If this were posted on fanfiction.net, it'd go straight to my list of "fics I'd never tire of". I love pieces that I'm capable of reading every single word of and then go back to read when I'm done the first time, pieces that evoke some sort of emotion or thought in me. I really loved how this one was set up so that each section matched up with another section in the piece, mirroring and/or complementing each other. You certainly worked well with the fact that the "don't forget me" was a bit of a callback to her and the Doctor's original parting. Made for a very beautiful piece, and in a way made the moments that occurred in the actual show mean something even more. I finished reading it feeling a little bit sad but at the same time I got the warm fuzzies.