ext_23765 ([identity profile] dbskyler.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dbskyler 2013-09-12 08:34 pm (UTC)

I once had a beta reader edit something like that out of my fic, and I remember thinking "ooh, yes, that does sound better." But I still don't look for it in my writing. I think you're right and it can convey a slightly different meaning, which is fine if that's the meaning you wanted. The trick is to use it on purpose.

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